Showing posts with label historical fiction. Show all posts
Showing posts with label historical fiction. Show all posts

Thursday, June 28, 2012

[TOPIC] Common Myths of Medieval Historical Fiction: Herbal Medicine

A leech called Panacea
     Authors of historical fiction set in the Middle Ages appear to have a penchant for certain romantic notions about life during that period. One of these is the efficacy of so-called natural medicine. Whether it is Brother Cadfael's herbarium or Lucy Wilton 's apothecary shop, the myth is not so much that such practices existed or were common but that they worked.
     Whatever palliative effect herbal medicaments may have had, there is a great deal to say about medicine during the Middle Ages that does not commend it. Authors appear to prefer to represent it romantically, mirroring the modern notion that somehow science is oppressive and that we have lost something by assigning older treatments to the past. The fact is that until the 1900s life expectancy was shorter than now. If you factor out child mortality, people generally did not live more than 50-60 years which only sounds old if you are under 25! Frankly, factoring out child mortality when discussing medieval medicine is absurd as children primarily died of illnesses that at least in the west no longer kills them. If things were better "back then" in terms of health, this would not be the case.
     "Science" has been reinterpreted over the past few decades since the very romantic 1960s as being an oppressive and heartless practice of capitalist patriarchy or some such bugaboo. All the word means is "knowledge". That is the key to understanding how it operates. Science calls for verification of claims, in medicine or in any other area of knowledge. A Lucy Wilton is shown learning herb craft from a teacher of lore passed on over the centuries. It can be enlightening to remember that lore included a lot more than just drink a tisane to rid oneself of a headache. It included the belief in the body's humors and how placing a leech on one's skin to suck out blood was a cure for any variety of ailments. In some cultures the accepted way to relief headaches was to drill a whole in the skull. The Church's lore may have been different from Pagan societies' but which herb was related to what saint basically mirrored it. Often an affliction was considered "God's will" and not treated. These issues were all concerned with belief, not science. When the two coincide, that's all it is, coincidence.
     In medieval era historical fiction you run into a lot of situations where a character runs into the herbalist's or apothecary's to get a nostrum much as we would run to the drug store for a bottle of cough syrup. Perhaps this is why the authors write it that way. It's familiar. Perhaps it is also more fun. One of Ellis Peters' Cadfael books is about gardening and herblore. And it's colorful, intriguing and romantic. It is, in short, prettier, much prettier than amputations, gangrene and leeches and considerably prettier than a dead body.

Originally posted 11/23/08.

See these excellent videos on medieval medicine from the Okinawa barony of the Society for Creatibe Anachronism, coutntesy Frian Jak.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=D577eQBNzUk&feature=relmfu
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xFpjVrYE7zM&feature=relmfu
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZRAUHvqZCxM&feature=relmfu
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y0zcbNF4wWA&feature=relmfu

Wednesday, February 8, 2012

And You Thought Braveheart Was Bad...

     I am one of many historical novelists who rolled her eyes and cried "Welladay!" watching the movie Bravehearrt with its wildly fanciful and downright irritating historical inaccuracies. No, William Wallace was not the father of Edward III... I know someone who was told that her recounting of the execution on Blacklow Hill of Piers Gaveston could not be accurate because everyone knows Patrick McGoohan threw him out a window. Read the Randall Wallace novel... it's just as bad, and he admits it's all fantasy and that he thinks it should have happened the way he said, not how it really did. Tell Gaveston that! Heck, tell Isabella that! "Mais non, I will not couchez avec this smelly blue Scottish man!"
     But... given the choice I would rather the kids I know got their history from movies like Braveheart... than from video games.
   That's one thing I learned during my little "Battle of Hastings" party with the neighborhood boys that I wrote about in yesterday's blog. Throughout the video two or three of them kept telling me about scenes in games the movie reminded them of. One boy's brother's name is Jason. I told him about Jason and the Argonauts and how Jason was a famous hero. He replied, "Jason wasn't always a hero because sometimes he fights other good guys." In the game. Another boy proceeded to describe all the weapons a medieval soldier would carry into battle, axes and swords and crossbows and morning stars.. all at the same time. I noticed in the game Stronghold that in the Dark Ages version the otherwise acceptable stronghold has a neat line of latrines and numerous eel pond.
     I never have been an old fuddy duddy when it comes to games. I had an old Sega Genesis once and only stopped playing with it because my eyesight and it were no longer compatible. But I worry about kids' understanding of the history of the peoples of our planet. I can imagine how hard it is to teach history these days.. constantly having to correct peculiar notions of what Beowulf was about or how much of the sort of goofy magic was in a legendary hero's story.
     I don't know what I am proposing.. nothing really. The average parent is not going to be able to sit down with their kids and calmly explain that knights did or did not do this or that. So just be aware as you are writing your novels that you probably will never be able to compete for the 15 year old mind.
     However, if any game companies are interested, my novel of Anglo Saxon England is definitely available for licensing.. Ah, "An Involuntary King: The Game". Splendid.

Tuesday, February 9, 2010

What Historical Novelists Do

Grania: She-King of the Irish Seas
It occurred to me recently that the old sobriquet applied to science fiction, speculative fiction, applies to historical fiction as well. Yes, depending on the story and whether ctual historical figures appear in a novel, the author tries to depict life in  another time as accurately as possible. That's an important factor, but it cannot be the artistry that makes the history meaningful and truly evocative.

I have been reading Morgan Llywelyn's Grania: She-King of the Irish Seas, and both the merits and the demerits of the novel highlighted for me just where the speculative aspect of historical fiction comes into play. The historical novelist starts with facts, whether about the historical personage or the events and setting appropriate to the time. Where we have documented facts about, say, Grania ui Maille's life, the author can record these or choose to skip any particular event. That's the second thing we do: we look at all we know about a person, place, event, or circumstance, and we choose which to represent in a fictional way. That is one thing I think was wrong with this book. So much of Grania's life was repetitive that it seemed to me some of the instances could have been left out. As a pirate and warrior, Grania would attack a merchant ship or make a raid on a town, get caught, suffer imprisonment or lose a loved one instead, then be released, go back home to reflect on what happened, and inevitably go back to what got her in trouble in the first place. In order to justify this the author explained each incident in the same way, that Grania felt responsible for her people, that she loved being free and wild, etc.

This aspect, the repetitive explanation, leads to the third thing historical novelists do, and that is where speculation comes in. I truly believe that this is both why people read historical novels instead of biographies and is also the hardest part of the craft. It is our job to look at the person and the facts and illustrate what we guess is the motivation for what happens. Why did Grania keep risking disaster? In other works, why did Llewellyn the Great forgive his wife Joanna’s infidelity? Why did Raymond of Toulouse desert during the Battle of Merzifon? Why did Elizabeth I stay unmarried? So often history offers us hints, but rarely does it give us definitive answers. Even when a historical figure writes down why s/he did what s/he did, can we trust that person to be honest with him/herself? In this novel the author has a big task. The historical "Grace O'Malley" is a tangle of contradictions. She appears in the historical record to switch loyalties and to betray her own people, coming back to them and fighting for them, only to switch again. One might speculate whether the woman was no more than an opportunist, or, like Llywelyn does in the novel, find other motivations, individual motivations, to ascribe this peripatetic life. That's where the book shines. You do see the speculative character based on a real person grow and you understand better her particular choices.

Those who rail at a historical novelist for an interpretation of events usually miss the point. The point is we don not know for certain. I have long believed that fiction writing is a sort of more humane form of the science of psychology. We write, and others read, a novel to examine the facts, add what we know of the human heart and mind, and we explain, suggest, and illustrate motivations and feelings. It is creative writing, but more than that it is speculative writing. It is storytelling that suggests "Perhaps?"

Monday, November 23, 2009

Historical Fiction Round Up, Holiday Gift Edition


We are delighted once again to offer this opportunity to authors to get the word out about their novels, new or old. Be sure to include instructions on how to find your book and, if possible, how to contact you.

For readers this post is a sort of shopping list for your holiday books. make sure you also check out the earlier Historical Fiction Roundups listed on the right of any post on this blog.

Since this is gift-giving season, we also would like to hear from everyone about books you loved and are sure other historical fiction fans would love to see wrapped up under the tree, or wherever you put your holiday presents.

Some fun gifts your medievalist fan would love are at Shieldwall Productions, a CafePress Store, with unique clothing and other gifts with unicorns, castles, and other designs. Take a look. The shirt on the left says "Historical novelists do it in the past!"

Present, you say?! For shame. The past is where it's at!

OK, now, let's hear the good news about your books and books you recommend!

Monday, November 16, 2009

Historical Fiction is Speculative Fiction


Remember when they used to call genre of Heinlein and Asimov science fiction?Some clever person came up with the idea sometime in the 60s or 70s to start calling it speculative fiction. This new designation was more accurate, after all, and what's more, it allowed for inclusion of some other genres with similar if not identical fans. What we called science fiction was not just about science. It was the "what if?" genre. What if humans could travel at speeds over the speed of light? What if we could travel through time? What if there was a society made up of magically powered princes who rode winged dragons/ That sort of thing.

You may, if you read me regularly, recall when I shared the comments of a woman who accused historical fiction of being misleading and downright wrong. She insisted that people read historical novels and come away with inaccurate ideas of what historical people were like, what they thought, and what they felt. My own reaction was something like,

A. Most historical novelists really try hard to research their eras and the events and people they portray, and
B. So what if they don't? It's a novel, not a textbook, for crying out loud.

That second of course sparked a furious flurry of "well I would never!" and "how could you?" and "lighten up, will you?" on the discussion lists and blogs. Oody woody hadda iddy biddy chip on our shoulders about not being historians, I think. In my conversations with actual historical novelists, I run into the "An it not be totally absurd, do as ye will". No potatoes for Pontius Pilate. That sort of thing. The story is what it it's all about.

So, to get to my point at long last, it occurs to me that historical fiction is also speculative fiction. I thought about this when reading the author's note in one of Sharon Kay Peman's novels. She said she tried to get it right, but if she wasn't spot on perhaps it did not really matter so much. She put it a l ot better than that, but just trust me. I agreed with her. She expressed something along the line that we can only guess what the people who lived through the events we write about thought or said or felt about them. We might have a hint in letters they wrote, but that's pretty rare. So what we do as historical novelists is speculate. We know, for instance, that Harold Godwinson hightailed it to Stamford Bridge where he fought, among others, his own brother Tostig. Then he had to turn around and dash south to be conquered by Normans. We know this. But how do we know how he felt when his kid brother lay dead near the bridge? And did he think about Edith Swanneck as he rode to his death? Was there a point when he thought, "Oh my God, we are going to lose this one?" Did one of his friends see the arrow pierce his eye and think, "No! Not Harold!"

That's all speculation, and it's our job to fill in those unknowns, the words that should appear in the word ballons. We try to do it carefully, ethically. We love these people we write about, and we want you all to come to know and love them too. So we will do all we can to make them real, make them accurate, but also make them feel like someone you could know.

Over and over I hear how someone became interested in history itself by reading historical fiction. In an essay I posted some weeks ago written by a teacher, she recounted how a young girl having read a fairly romantic portrayal of Pocahontas asked herself what the woman would probably have really been like. What would she have made of England when she went there? Did she ever miss her native shore? What really happened between her and John Smith? This same little girl started hitting the history books. If she keeps at it, makes primary research her career or even j ust her avocation, who knows what she might discover?

To the woman who told me historical novels were lies, all I can say is that it is one of the wonderful aspects of humans that we have imaginations and that we speculate about "what if"? It's that instiinct that also makes us wonder, "How would that person feel if.." and breeds what we calll humanity.

Saturday, October 17, 2009

Why & How I Teach with Historical Fiction

Borrowed shamelessly from Scholastic.

By Tarry Lindquist

Here's the story on historical fiction in my classroom: It illuminates time periods, helps me integrate the curriculum, and enriches social studies. Just take Amy's word for it. At the end of our westward-expansion unit, while modeling her journal entry after a fictional account we'd read, this fifth grader wrote: "Dear Diary, July 30, 1852: This journey has been heart-wrenching, thirst-quenching, and most of all, an adventure I will never forget." Blending stories into a study of history turns the past into a dynamic place.

Of course, historical fiction doesn't stand alone in my instructional program; even the best literature cannot address skills and processes unique to social studies that kids must learn. I have students balance fiction with fact, validate historical hypotheses with research. Historical fiction is the spice.

To help you build good fiction into your social studies program, below you'll find:
  • Seven Reasons I Teach with Historical Fiction
  • Fifteen Fabulous New Historical Fiction Books
  • Is Pocahontas Real? Discovering Where History Stops and the Story Starts
  • Seven Reasons I Teach With Historical Fiction: It piques kids' curiosity.
Read more.

I can certainly attest to the efficacy of historical fiction in engaging a child's imagination about history, people, geography, sociology, and more. In about 1957 I started watching the British television series, The Adventures of Robin Hood, sstarring Richard Greene and Alan Wheatly. Something in it either spoke to an inner reality for me or implanted that reality so permanently that I have never been the same. I knew those people, that time, these cultural metaphors. Or perhaps they took me over and drew me out of my own time and place to live in theirs.

I am coming full circle now that I am crowding sixty. With my relatively recent re-immersion in writing historical fiction that comfortable old world is becoming a reality to me again. This time around it is the more accurate Middle Ages that draws me. That's not really new, since my thirst for the world of characters like Robin Hood developed in my teens when my friend Laura and I started writing about the characters who people my novel, An Involuntary King. It was my desire to place that story in a time not already taken with historical facts that would refute my fiction that led me to set it before Charlemagne when I thought no one knew anything about what was going on in the world. Now I am thirsting for further facts, to engage my imagination in real history about an era, Anglo Saxon England, that I stumbled into decades ago.

Perhaps this is why I am not fond of unicorns, dragons, and wizards and not even of the goddess religion remake of the Middle Ages. I did not fall in love with a fantasy way back in 1957 but rather a real if fictionalized world that seemed so right to me. I am smart enough now to know the truth is grittier, but I am also adult enough and sensible enough not to be repulsed. Maybe Robin didn't really take showers in a waterfall, but so what? The time doesn't so much
appeal to me as it is familiar to me. Warts and all.

I know a woman who though otherwise intelligent decries historical fiction as lying to unsuspecting readers about the past and its people. I could not disagree more. The fact is we don't really know every detail about their lives and their thoughts. By speculating, each historical novelist offers one possibility to consider. And that's where stirring children's imagination about the past through fiction comes in. When they wonder how Pocahontas may have lived, may have felt about the events and people in her life, they begin to
empathize. If you can empathize with someone from another time, you can empathize with your contemporaries in different lands. And the Great Spirit knows how much we need more empathy.

Tuesday, September 15, 2009

Is Your Novel On our Calendar?

Mayhap you have had a chance to check out our Today in Medieval History daily online calendar.

Mayhap you have noticed the instructions on the page that tells you how to add this calendar to your blog or web site?

But mayhap you do not know that if your novel, old or new, depicts a famous event in medieval history -- an d we define that as being between 500 and 1600 AD give or take -- we would be pleased as Punch to at least print your title and ordering information and would also like to print an excerpt from your book describing some aspect of the event!

All you have to do is send us your title, the ISBN and, if including an excerpt, a Word or text file attachment to hawthorne@nanhawthorne.com with the subject line "for the medieval calendar" or words to that effect.

For some examples, take a look at these pages:

19 April 1536
5 August 1192
22 August 1485

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P.S. We even want to know about books you read about these events. For instance, anyone know of a book that tells how Ben Jonson, the playwright and poet, came to be arrested for manslaughter?

Wednesday, September 9, 2009

Names That Became Everyday Words –Too Late for You

You probably won’t be writing about anyone gerrymandering in Ancient Greece or say that Marie Antoinette wore a “Mae West “. But there are some words that well-respected historical novelists let slip into their stories without realizing that the persons from whom the names were “lifted” weren’t even born the year the story took place. For instance, characters in Michael Jecks’ The Abbot’s Gibbet worry about being “lynched by a lynch mob” in the time of Edward II.

Or is it that cut-and-dried? Could some of these words have been mistakenly attributed to famous names?

boycott

Captain Charles Boycott (1832-1897) was the agent of an absentee English landlord in County Mayo, Ireland. When tenants demanded lower rents, Boycott evicted them. The tenants decided that instead of resorting to violence to protest the evictions, they would convince everyone to refuse to deal with him in any business situation. The word boycott came to mean to refuse to buy a product in order to use the economic hardship to change the behavior of a business. This one is a true case of a “timely” word that cannot be used in stories that take place before 1880 when it was first used in print.

Lynch

There are several people named Lynch whose behavior may have caused their names to be synonymous with extra judicial hanging sentences. One may be James Lynch, the mayor of Galway, Ireland, who hanged his own son from their house’s balcony for the murder of a Spanish visitor in 1483. This is disputed, but is as logical as the other attributions in colonial Virginia. Depending on how Jecks spelled it, however, it might be quite “timely” as it may actually derive from the word “linch” meaning “to beat severely with a pliable instrument, to chastise or to maltreat”. It appeared in print as “Lynch” in 1836, as “linch” no earlier than 1570 when it meant “to limp”.

martinet

Here is another one that may or may not fit this definition. It is true that Louis XIV’s Inspector General of the Army was named Jean Martinet, but a “martinet” is also a type of whip. Another interpretation comes from a witch trial from the early 1500s where the women tried referred to the Devil as Martinet (maistre Martinet), or the Little Master (petit maistre). First in print in1670 or in the final instance above, by Ben Jonson in 1609 in Masque Queens B 2, “Their litle Martin is he that calls them to their Conuenticles.”.

masochism

A verified “timely” word often, with “sadism” noted by historical novelists as a no-no in books taking place before the man’s stay on Earth. Leopold Ritter[1] von Sacher-Masoch (1836–1895) was a poet and novelist, as well as the author of a progressive literary review that preached against antisemitism and for the emancipation of women. In his private life he gave himself to a certain baroness as a sexual slave. Later the second half of his last name became synonymous with a sexual aberration where a person, the masochist, requires cruelty to enjoy the act. It now can mean nothing more than a person who likes to be unhappy. But if your novel takes place before 1886. it is off limits. That is, the word is off limits… you can use the disorder undiagnosed.

quisling

You can say Robert the Bruce betrayed William Wallace, but you can’t say Bruce was a quisling. Vidkun Quisling collaborated with nazi Germany against his homeland, Norway. You may not use the term to denote a traitor or collaborator unless it is being used after December 28, 1941, when it was first used thus by Winston Chrchill in an address to the American Congress.

sadism

Donatien Alphonse François, marquis de Sade (1740–1814) predates his partner in sado-masochism, but he is just as “timely”. He was an aristocrat, revolutionary and writer of novels, short stories, plays and political tracts. He is better known in common parlance for being, well, a sadist. He lived a scandalous life of debauchery that included abuse – unlike Masoch, of others. In one famous episode a woman he had imprisoned and abused physically and sexually escaped to tell the world, after which de Sade was put under surbveillence and caught at it. His name did not become a diagnosis until 1843. Sio, again, you can create all the sadistic characters you want. You just can’t call them that until after 1843.

sideburns

Also called sideboards, sideburns is basically a full beard with the chin shaved bare. That leaves the moustache and “sideburns”. A similar fashion is called mutton chops, as a result of their shape. The man whose name was adopted for the former term, sort of, was Ambrose Everett Burnside (1824–1881), a Union general in the American Civil War. His habit of wearing his facial hair as described here resulted in the style called burnsides and later sideburns. How likely you are to want to say your Roman era protagonist wore sideburns is dubious, but if you do, call it something else.


Other words for which you might check the derivation before using them in your historical novel are: cardigan and raglan, jumbo, pompadour, chauvinism, rubenesque and “Wellies”.

Saturday, July 11, 2009

"Historical Fiction Round-up" a Success!

More than a dozen great historical novels are posted on our first Historical Fiction Round-up -- check them out!

We will do these round-ups regularly, maybe every six weeks or less. In the meantime, feel free to list your books on that page... people will be coming back here to look at the list often.

Thanks for your participation, both authors and readers!

Tomorrow: OUr 300th blog entry!!

Wednesday, June 17, 2009

Next Debate: What Standard for Accuracy in Historical Fiction?

fter failing so miserably to get my point understood in my post "Mistake Amateur Reviewers Make" understood, this time I am just going to ask the question, not opine on my own behalf. For the record, I was not talking about authors in that post but in essence saying that good books should not be subjected to bad amateur reviewers. OK, 'nuff said. Now on to the debate inadvertently raised by that post.

THE QUESTION: What level of historical accuracy should a novel be held to?

The Positions: None

My oft-quoted (by me)husband would probably say that fiction is ficrion and readers should just understand that. He would say that to demand absolute accuracy is impossible, that for any number of reasons, the fact that history itself is often fiction, the fact that the whole point of a novel is to interpret and to put words in historical figures' mouths, absolute slavish accuracy is not an appropriate goal. He's on one extreme of this debate, and all I will say about that is that I don't agree with him that accuracy is not important at all.

The Positions: Complete Accuracy

The other extreme, the group I called accuracy nerds in my early post, is the other extreme. They will quibble with anything, everything, and often for reasons of their own. They insist that even words that entered the language later than a period should not be used, no matter how little later.

You, dear reader, probably fall somewhere in between these extremes. I do as well. You understand that a historical novel cannot, by definition, meet the standards of historical nonfiction. It is supposed to be an interpretation of what really happened. It is, like all fiction, speculative, guessing at what might have been one person's nature, another person's feelings, and another person's motivation. Nevertheless you have standards for what may be interpreted and what must conform to the record.

So that's question. What must conform? What might one legitimately dither with, what must adhere to known facts?

Susan Higginbotham, author of The Traitor's Wife and Hugh and Bess, offered this to the discussion via comments on the earlier post:

I agree fully that one shouldn't let one's personal prejudices color a review and that writers have to fill in gaps and do a certain amount of interpretation. But having characters alive and kicking five years after they died, or adding or subtracting twenty years from a historical person's known age, or confusing a historical person with his grandfather by the same name or title isn't interpretation, it's just plain sloppy. Worse, it just gives people who hate historical fiction another weapon with which to criticize the genre.

Use the comments section of this post to register your position.

Thank you to all who debated the reviewer post and who are ready to make their points here as well.

Sunday, June 14, 2009

Two Waycooll Things for Historical Novelists!

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Whether you publish your book through a traditional publisher or on your own as a "free range" author you are going to have to do some mighty marketing on your own. Unless you are a Star like Stephen King or J. K. Rowling, the publisher ain't gonna do much of it. That's why this book is such a treasure. It is as useful to the independent as the signed author. It is sensible, practical and easy to put into action. And it is filled with information, addresses, tools and ideas. As a mostly pretty shy person, no really, I especially appreciated the part where Smith tells you exactly what to say when you walk into a bookstore to get them to carry your book. If it is a POD book and with curling lip the manager says "Oh it's a POD book" for instance, Smith says to point out, "Yes, but that means you don't have to buy a whole case... just two or three." This is a woman after my own heart... drop the defensive response and look at things from the other person's point of view.. and speak to their advantage. Get this book! You need it.

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Tuesday, June 9, 2009

Your Choice: Historical Fiction or Fictional History?

s an author, have you chosen - or would you choose - to write fiction about real historical figures or purely fictional characters in a historical setting? Or do you portray historical figures within a story that is mostly fiction about fictional characters? Why did you make that choice?

As a reader, do you have a preference? Why?

Please share your answer in the Comments.

I am fascinated with everyday people's lives, so although my first is about a king and a queen, they are figments of my friend's and my imaginations. I intend to pursue completely fictional characters in historical settings in most if not all of my future novels. I am more interested in how average people interacted in these intriguing times. And I must admit I prefer novels that at most drag historical figures through like props or preferably offer me the more obscure. Just personal preference.

So let's hear from you!

Wednesday, May 6, 2009

The Importance of Historical Novels: An Informal Exploration

By Octavia Randolph
Octavia.net

The title above is a mildly provocative statement. But those amongst us who enjoy reading (and writing) fiction set within a given historical period believe that good examples of the genre do far more than entertain. Well written historical fiction can hand us a telescope to peer back into our own or another culture's past. In a day when world history is given short shrift by many school systems, reading Dumas' The Three Musketeers may be the only way to glimpse the dizzying complexity of 17th century French political and social intrigue. Carefully researched historical fiction can educate, and even more excitingly, provoke speculation through original conclusions to historical puzzles. In Mary Renault's brilliant The King Must Die and Bull From the Sea, she takes the classical hero Theseus and presents a wholly believable character whose strengths and flaws allow us to understand and even anticipate the heretofore inexplicable aspects of his behavior. His abandonment of the princess Ariadne on the island of Naxos is transformed from the disgraceful act of an ingrate (she has after all, helped him to triumph over the minotaur - in Renault's book, a man, not man/beast) to an utterly correct and necessary action allowing both Theseus and Ariadne to come to their fullest potential.

Another way we know historical fiction is important is the firestorm of controversy it sometimes elicits. Isn't there something remarkable about the fact that 70 years after it was written Margaret Mitchell's Gone With the Wind was still powerful enough to provoke a response such as Alice Randall's The Wind Done Gone? Described by its author as an "antidote", The Wind Done Gone is a retelling of Mitchell's story, using many of the same characters - Art imitating Art.

Let's turn now from the broad canvas to the intimate personal narrative, such as Jane Mendelsohn's I Was Amelia Earhart. This slender book takes us inside the aviator's mind, up to and including her experiences on the South Sea island where she and navigator Fred Noonan make their way after ditching their plane. With sensitivity and deftness it allows the reader imagined access into Earhart's thoughts, and provides a form of emotional closure to the mystery of her disappearance. As in Renault's books, solutions to unanswerable questions have been proposed, and the reader in encountering these solutions and examining their ramifications may find previously opaque eras or personalities resolving into sharp and even indelible focus.

My own fiction deals with a time seemingly far removed from our own. Late ninth century Britain was largely composed of competing Anglo-Saxon kingdoms - people who knew Christianity, enjoyed good ale, composed epic poetry, and forged wondrous weapons and jewellery. They also lived under the legal code that would become English Common Law. Suddenly, and with increasing frequency, marauding heathen sea farers from first Norway and then Denmark began decades of terrifyingly violent predation upon the mostly agrarian Anglo-Saxons. Most of the predation was carried out by a people the Anglo-Saxons called Danes - they were in fact from the same areas of modern Northern Germany and Denmark that the Angles and Saxons had come from a few hundred years earlier. That is very meaningful to me as a novelist, that connection; and the ability to see in repeating cycles of invasion a mirrored view of one's own history.

The Vikings originally wanted treasure, but later they also wanted something more precious - land. They wished to settle and live in the Anglo-Saxon kingdoms they had toppled. Decades of warfare, appeasement, negotiation, and intermarriage of Saxons and Danes ensued. A new nation was slowly being forged - a process that as we know from world history, is rarely comfortable for its participants. The examination of conflicting values, divided loyalties, and the thrust of opposing religious beliefs and practices are timeless and universal human themes, and make a rich ground for the novelist's imagination.

Viking attacks followed a predictable pattern - small bands of men sailing during the good weather, in Summer, striking quickly at more or less unprotected coastal targets, and then fleeing home with the booty. But in 865 this pattern changed; something called the Great Army landed in southern England, and stayed. These men were serious about settling, and conquering as much land as they could. Anglo-Saxon kingdoms fought back, were often defeated in a series of mostly small skirmishes, and resorted to buying off the enemy with silver. Appeasement never lasted for long; the Danes were hard to make treaties with as they generally had few acknowledged leaders and so a peace treaty made with one was not honoured by another, and so forth. One by one the seven Anglo-Saxon kingdoms fell, until by 872 there were only two left, Wessex and Mercia.

It's an interesting story, but where is the compelling hook? In periods when power hangs in the balance between nations, it is as usual in the individual. In the case of English history, a young man who became King of Wessex in 871 at age 23. His name was Ælfred and he is the only British monarch to be awarded the honourific "the Great". Ælfred was a stunningly effective leader; if he had been less so we might be holding this conversation in a language much closer to Danish. Would that be a bad thing? Not necessarily - but it certainly would be different.

I don't write about Ælfred except as a peripheral character; to me it is more interesting to see things from the point of view of a more passive observer than the prime actor. So my narrator is a young woman, who can relate what she witnesses. But it is the late 9th century, when so much hung in the balance, that I find intensely interesting.

So much for the setting - what about the actual, and factual framework on which to hang a story? What do we know about the Anglo-Saxons - this vitally important ancestor of ours - an ancestor to all of us who speak English as our first language? We have documents - because they were Christianized they had an effective means of writing, and Ælfred himself translated Boethius' Consolations of Philosophy from Latin to Old English so it could be widely read by his people. The primary document of the period is an invaluable record known as the Anglo-Saxon Chronicle, which was begun in Ælfred's time and documents the known history of the nation year by year from the year one and was continued right up to the 12th century. We have in a precious single manuscript the saga Beowulf, which tells us much of Anglo-Saxon mores, warrior life, the roles of women, and much more. And a handful of other fragments of poetry and wills and laws and ecclesiastical writings. We have physical evidence - artifacts such as the magnificent Sutton Hoo Treasure, the burial goods of King Raedwald, who died about 625. We have other grave finds from many Anglo-Saxon burial grounds and occasional finds such as weapons retrieved from rivers and bogs. We have very little architecture, for the Anglo-Saxons made full use of the mighty oaks they found and built largely in timber, but post and beam construction using massive members does leave post holes and several great halls - the homes of tribal chiefs - and other settlements have been recreated. They did build with stone, mostly churches which were overbuilt by later Norman stuctures, but we do have a few small Anglo-Saxon churches which survive.

How do we use these things? You certainly don't need to try to reconstruct all of the events of the era from the brief mentions in the Anglo-Saxon Chronicle; there are many fine history books that will stitch together the action for you far more easily, and more being published all the time. But what primary sources do provide is a feel for the era that can't be obtained anywhere else - the rhythm, the cadence, the structure of the language, the emphasis placed on certain topics or persons - that a modern source can't provide. I'm also a great believer in looking at the artifacts and landscapes of the era whenever possible. Studying one beautiful brooch, or fragment of embroidery, or a pattern welded sword, or a cluster of clay loom weights in person conveys information, and spurs the imagination, in a way that no amount of looking at photos can.

And this is where, in the combination of reading and looking, you can make the informed imagining that is perhaps not documented but is more than likely. For instance, we know that in both pagan, that is earlier, Anglo-Saxon society and Viking society, the tribal leader - who was always a war chief - also served as a religious medium between his people and the Gods; served as a priest in fact in ceremonies and sacrifices. Sometimes sacrifices to ensure good harvest or success in battle would entail the sacrifice of animals and possibly even humans. Other times objects such as food items or baskets of amber were buried, seemingly as a thank-offering. That's what we know. What we can see are finds of spear points, seaxs, swords, helmets and other war gear - all tremendously valuable, precious even - which have been purposely bent or broken or otherwise rendered unusable, and then deposited either into rivers or in shallow pits dug in bogs. This is where the informed imagining comes into play: These may be weapons that were sacrificed as thank-offerings for victory, or weapons that have been "punished" for failing their owners. In historic fiction we have the luxury of drawing these sorts of conclusions, which is one of the reasons I prefer writing fiction to writing history.

Certainly one of the things to be considered when writing historical fiction is the amount and quality of evidence that remains. Especially in a distant era or for a people that were not literary - the Danes for example had only runes with which to write, a very imperfect method of recording things -or those who perpetually lost out to other dominant cultures and thus had their history obliterated or altered to reflect the conqueror's viewpoint. Where is that information, what language is it in, what remains of the physical evidence, how easy is it to view, and so on.

This brings me to the unasked question of Why do we write historical fiction? I mean, it's set in history, we know how it turned out! The task is to show the utter inevitability of what happened, as in the books of Mary Renault; or how it almost did not happen, or that it actually happened differently and the story has been altered either deliberately or through accretion over the years, such as Donna Cross' Pope Joan, about a ninth century female pope. History, as has been famously noted, is written by the victors. And, in the form of historical fiction which is sometimes referred to as "mirror history" it can show an alternate history - a book built on the premise of what if Napoleon hadn't lost at Waterloo.

But the real point is, even if you are writing about a time period or actor very well known, there is always the deeper questions to be answered - the "understory". The understory in The Circle of Ceridwen is Who is my enemy?

[Octobia Randolph is the author of ground-breaking novels set in the Anglo Saxon era in England. Visit her fiction and much more at Octavia.net.]

Monday, April 13, 2009

How Far Is Too Far?

I had another one of those discussions about historical accuracy in historical fiction with Jim Tedford the other day. He is on the side of remembering that a novel is fiction and if people choose to believe everything you wrote is fact then they are the fools, not the author. He concedes that it is nice if the author includes an author's note that says which bits were true, but he does not even require that. And he is making more and more sense.

If you asked him, he would tell you what he thinks. He would say fiction is fiction. What is different about historical fiction? Why does Braveheart get your knickers into such a twist?" I sputter this reason and that and ultimately find myself expressing my personal druthers rather than any sound and definitive argument.

So here are some examples of making free with history that I want you to look at and choose any that you think go too far. Let us know in the comments section below. Tell us why that one is not OK but the others are. There is no foregone conclusion. We want to hear what you have to say. These are, by the way, all real books.

Specimen 1 - The author changes an events sequence in history to make the story flow better. She has a relatively minor event occur earlier than it really did.

Specimen 2 - The author sets the novel in a real time with some authentic historical figures as minor characters, but the kingdom the story takes place in is fictional and the main characters fictional.

Specimen 3 - The author uses real historical figures but has two who never could have met do so and fall in love and have a child whom history records as the woman's husband's chi9ld.

Specimen 4 - The author embellishes on a real relationship that we do not however know much about, making an ambiguous one into a great romance.

Specimen 5 - In a series, the author puts his hero into numerous historical events and makes him responsible for all the pivbotsl deeds that were done by real people.

Specimen 6 - An author brings technologies into a story that did not exist in that time and place.

Specimen 7 - An author applies quite modern behavior to a character living in the 12th century.

Feel free to mention books you think have these characteristics or to mention more.

Tuesday, February 17, 2009

Where To Draw the Accuracy Line

My reprint of my article "Word Rivets" inspired a little discussion of how petty people can be about the authenticity of historical fiction. My particular point was that insisting on the use of one modern English word ober another in "translating" words someone in Anglo Saxon England said was to get into some absurd nuances.

There is a limit to how accurate an author can be and still communicate to modern readers. I ultimately prefer to err on the side of good storytelling. As I think about this topic, however, I realize there is a line I draw, but have not yet articulated where that line is and how it comes to be there.

I would like your opinion in the Comments section of this post.

I will offer a few examples of books that I just couldn't read because they were so over the line.

Sea of Trolls lost me in the first few pages when the eighth century Anglo Saxon children included a girl named Lucy who wanted a knight in armor to come and take her away to his castle. Why does that bug me? This one I might be able to answer. I like Anglo Saxon England the way it was. Sans knights, sans castles. I stopped reading if only because I could not trust the book to follow Anglo Saxon history and culture. I can't remember anything about another book I started to read and hit the stop button after the two 12th century knights started picking up steins and talking about chastity belts. I guess I just don't care for that image of the middle ages, the chastity belt business -- though I know a great joke about one.

Of course the Great Bugaboo of medieval historical fiction is the book and movie Braveheart. I think there are many things historical fiction devotees can point to about this movie, but the two that get me personally are related to Edward II and his wife Isabella. It was bad enough that they had Daddy Longshanks throwing Edward's boyfriend, Peter, out the window, but having the queen.. no, I mean the wife of the king.. having sex with and conceiving Edward III with William Wallace was enough to make me shriek aloud. I don't like real people so thoroughly moved around in history and acting out of character... I guess. I like Edward II. I don't want to see him, rewritten that thoroughly... I guess.

The question I am asking here is not what bugs us individually but where to draw the line. In some cases the facts are known, so it is easy enough to point to fiction being no more than changing facts. That's not what I think fiction is. To me fiction is interpreting and amplifying on facts. I would say that if the author explains himself or herself, as I did with my entirely fictional kingdom in An Involuntary Kingdom, but Randall Wallace does this in Braveheart. He says he communed with William Wallace in the porch of a church overlooking where Wallace was executed and he said OK to the changes. He wishes. Now it's my task to decide why what I did was OK, but not what Randall Wallace did. Have any thoughts on that?

Let's take it from there. I could go on with other reasons people change history in their novels and movies, but let's consider just this one for now. Why was it Randall Wallace's altering history was over the line, but my whole cloth creation of a kingdom was not? Or was it?

Tuesday, December 16, 2008

Alas, Poor William de Braoise..

I am reading Celia Hayes' Aldsverein: The Harvest, the third of a trilogy about German immigrants in Texas in the mid-19th century. I can tell already that when I get around to the second book, the death of a central character is going to devastate me... I tear up just knowing about what happens to him.

It was that way with William de Braoise, Princess Joan's lover, in the second of the Heaven Tree Trilogy by Edith Pargenter. When what happens to him when he is caught at it by her husband had me sobbing. I grieved for a couple weeks. And I often say "Now I am going to have to kill myself" when I reach the end of a novel I have been thoroughly engrossed in. "How can I go on without these people?" I ask myself.

It strikes me that even if some of these dearly departed who are breaking my heart were not in fact fictional, if they were in fact historical figures, the fact is given my reading tastes -- i.e., anything that takes place after 1600 is science fiction -- these darlings would be dead now anyway. Long. long dead. Llewellyn, Joan, William, the whole lot, would all be pushing up a gazillionth generation of daisies now.

So clearly the author has been effective! When I sat chilled to the bone at the sacrifice of Conal in Edward Rutherfurd's Princes of Ireland or sobbing at the killing of Patrick Smith on Vinegar Hill in his Rebels of Ireland,it's his marvellous characters and stories that are doing it to me, not that I am, like, a sap, or anything, right?

Let's not even get into what Nicholas de Fleury did to me at the end of Book 6 of House of Niccolo! I used to love that man...

Sigh.